You could stand to get some writing advice
from an author of bad shipping fiction.
Millie’s line in panel 2 does not scan.
It may be a matter of delivery or pronunciation, but I just can’t hear the beats in my head. Maybe my tin ear is worse than I thought.
Millie is enjoying this arc way too much.
These are great! So fun.
Dana Simpson
October 18, 2013
Averagemoe about 1 month ago
You could stand to get some writing advice
from an author of bad shipping fiction.
Uncle Kenny about 1 month ago
Millie’s line in panel 2 does not scan.
eddi-TBH about 1 month ago
It may be a matter of delivery or pronunciation, but I just can’t hear the beats in my head. Maybe my tin ear is worse than I thought.
Nuke Road Warrior about 1 month ago
Millie is enjoying this arc way too much.
delennwen about 1 month ago
These are great! So fun.